Monday, November 21, 2011

Chuckles

Removed by author, please refer to My "Duh" Moment

5 comments:

  1. Brilliant! It just gets better and better. I'm still a bit sceptical of Chuckles motives. I'm not sure that him offering Aimee a ride is purely an altruistic move on his part. I'm just dying to know who Aimee is running from. Is her dad in the mob or a drug cartel? Heth

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  2. Thank you for continuing!!

    Ok. I agree with Heth, it appears he may have an ulterior motive... But, I think it's too early in the story for something seriously bad to happen to her.

    I do see some potential, however, for a strange loop of people who know people but didn't know that anyone knew anyone else - If you know what I mean.

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  3. No, thank you for continuing to comment!

    Heth, my dear. It's gonna start to get a little fantastical, but I'll try to make the medicine as sweet as possible. Stay with me, stay with me.

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  4. I had NO IDEA that this story was a demonic story.
    It's real good.
    ~alissa

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  5. Thank you, Alissa! Thanks for the consistent comments and interest. Love it. Keep coming back, please, and let me know what you think.

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